tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587213332211322913.post1491905318099295606..comments2014-04-08T03:41:17.890-07:00Comments on Random Musings of an Aspiring Author: Teaser TuesdayBecca Cooperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04093826047366957481noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587213332211322913.post-34306622506406393072010-01-12T14:31:09.152-08:002010-01-12T14:31:09.152-08:00Whoah. I like the sentence variation a lot in this...Whoah. I like the sentence variation a lot in this - the breaks between longer description and a sudden, short piece of dialogue worked well to add to the suspense. Nice tease!Lia Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04316015024213640823noreply@blogger.com